Here's the first of three Blog Critiques. Today I'm taking a post by Adarsh Thrampy from Sales Maximus and I'm going to suggest three ways that he can start improving his writing TODAY - and also suggesting a new structure for a revised version of his article. There are two more critiques in this mini-series to come.
Blog Post Critique 1 – Adarsh Thrampy/Sales Maximus


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